Monday, October 1, 2012

These are two sample essays for Writing Part 2.

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The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
            Write at least 150 words.


IELTS Writing Task 1
model answer:
The total number of all species of turtles in India has been relatively stable over the last two decades, although there were significant drops in numbers between 1987 and 1989 and again in 1992 and 1996. Since 2004 there has been an improvement in numbers of all species, although the graph shows a slight decrease in 2010.

In contrast, the population of Leatherback turtles has suffered a severe decline, particularly in 1988 when numbers fell dramatically. The rate of decline in the population appears to have slowed and it has remained relatively stable since 2009.

There was also a fall in the number of Green turtles of around 30% between 1984 and 2002. The population increased slightly in 2010 but it had dropped again by 2012.

It is only Olive Ridley turtles that have seen a steady increase in population over this period. Their numbers dropped slightly in 2007 and again in 2012 but the overall trend has been a positive one.
(162 words)




The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

             Write at least 150 words.

Beer
 Country   Amount* 
 1 Ireland  155 litres
 2 Germany  119 litres
 3 Austria  106 litres
 4 Belgium  98 litres
 5 Denmark  98 litres
 6 United Kingdom  97 litres
 7 Australia  89 litres
 8 United States  85 litres
 9 Netherlands  80 litres
 10 Finland  79 litres
Fruit juice
 Country   Amount* 
 1 Canada  52.6 litres
 2 United States  42.8 litres
 3 Germany  38.6 litres
 4 Austria  37.3 litres
 5 Sweden  35.5 litres
 6 Australia  34.4 litres
 7 Finland  33 litres
 8 United Kingdom  29.3 litres
 9 Netherlands  28.1 litres
 10 New Zealand  24.8 litres
*Litres per person per year
model answer:
The tables show the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in countries around the world. Beer is most popular in Ireland, with the average Irish drinking 155 litres per year. Germany ranks second with 119 litres per person. In fact, the top six countries in terms of consumption of beer are all European. Australia and The United States come next in seventh and eighth positions, with Netherland and Finland consuming the least beer of the countries mentioned. Finnish people only drink an average of 79 litres of beer a year.

The country which consumes by the greatest quantity of fruit juice per capita is Canada. Canadians drink an average of 52.6 litres each a year, that’s almost double the consumption of New Zealand, which is placed at the bottom of the table. Another North American country, The United States, come second in the table, while German drinkers are ranked at number three, consuming an average of 38.6 litres annually. Swedes drink approximately the same quantity of fruit juice as Australians, which is 35.5 litres per year. The Finnish and the British drink 33 and 29.3 litres per year respectively.

(194 words)

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Answer no.1 and write the essay(s) for no. 2 and 3:

1) 
Adjective or Adverb?

Complete the answer by filling the gaps with an adverb or adjective from the box below.

dramatic dramatically impressive impressively
slight slightly steady steadily
sharp sharply steep steeply
IELTS Writing Task 1
The world population grew .................... between 1960 and 2000.

The world population experienced a .................... growth between 1960 and 2000.



IELTS Writing Task 1
European City Tourism showed an .................... growth of 50% for three consecutive years from 2006 to 2008.

European City Tourism grew .................... by 50% for three consecutive years from 2006 to 2008.



IELTS Writing Task 1
Diesel consumption showed a .................... increase between 2010 and 2011.

Diesel consumption increased .................... between 2010 and 2011.



IELTS Writing Task 1
Consumption of chocolate fell .................... between 1970 and 2010.

There was a .................... fall in consumption of chocolate between 1970 and 2010.



IELTS Writing Task 1
Worldwide sales of CD-ROM drives climbed .................... during the first half of the year before falling .................... in August.

There was a .................... climb in worldwide sales of CD-ROM drives during the first half of the year before a .................... fall in August. 


2)
             You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
            
             Write at least 150 words.
IELTS Writing Task 1

3)
            You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

             Write at least 150 words.
IELTS
Country Population Irrigated land Water consumption per person
Brazil 176 million 26,500 km² 359 m³
Democratic
Republic
of Congo
5.2 million 100 km² 8 m³